My canvas size was rather small but I think the canvas size was good enough to show my ability of painting. I thought of the water as shapes of dark and light colors because that way I can more focus on big picture rather than small colors. I did really good job on creating a sense of transparency. I think my ellipses and viewpoints are correct and very consistent because I tried to not move my spot and the light at all. My colors are clear. I finished the painting in the allotted time even though I came to the art studio at my free mods. My object was special for me because I liked how feathers are softy and therefore I have liked cloths with feathers. I say that “nothing needs to be heavy and concerned”. I could easily focused on the work. I achieved a believable illusion of transparency.